Friday, 24 October 2014

A Poem To Me, Makes Me Feel Free

To explain what a poem is to me what shall the first line be
Something filled with passion and hard work, where your mind can be free
A poem lets you escape from your day
Let whatever's bothering you fade away
Freeing you from your overpowering thoughts
Getting rid of the sick feeling from those stress knots
A poem to me opens my mind
It provides peace for me to find
Nothing out of the ordinary or crazy
Makes you have to think, no more being lazy
The messages are powerful and deep
The words don't come cheap
It has taught me how to express myself in a whole new way
Maybe even to brighten up someone's day
Using un-common words
Letting my speech fly free as birds
I feel comfortable to rhyme more
I don't care if you think I'm a bore
Poems are a powerful thing
To me relief is what they bring




4 comments:

  1. Very clever Kait. I am really impressed with your creativity and effort. Well done. Two tiny technical things;
    - someone's day = apostrophe possessive
    - Letting my speech - capital L

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